Broad Haven
Broad HavenSeabirds soar and shriek,far, far above the sea,and distant thundercloudsbuild wondrous, crystal shapesat ballerinas pace.High above my head,white silk against the blue,in frozen movement...
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~ rich & inventive imagery~ multiple "story lines" worked together harmoniously~ perceptions acted upon by consequence~ vivid outer setting for a terse internal narrativemuch happening here ......
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There are some happy images, some sad, but when all is said and done, we move on.Suzanne
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*Beautifully* written Davie! There are some wonderful images and lines here - and a tender wistfulness that is lovely."Idiot, n. A member of a large and powerful tribe whose influence in human affairs...
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Thank you Ben, Kazoom and Valoe for your kind words. Much appreciated.Davie
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You would get my vote for originality with this one Davey boy, a little treasure, BG
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What an awesome piece! Moving...great imagery...incredible potential for interpretation on many levels.....it's all there. Bravo!GaladrielThis is my simple religion. There is no need for temples; no...
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Fabulous piece, Davie...great to see the way your writing has developed and blossomed...this is excellent work, for all of the reasons already mentioned, and more...evocative and atmospheric,...
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Thank you BG, Galadriel and soulsease for your generous and kind remarks. I sweated blood over this, so if it shows progress, perhaps that's the reason! Anyway, many thanks to all of you.Davie
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well done dave~hugs~ as always Ure words were greatly enjoyed, great jobLuVMeMoonchild/AKA-Wrathchild"...he came out of nowhere, always a friend of the victim at the slaughter of the innocents."
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Thank you mighty, and ~hugs~ to you too, for your generous thoughtsDavie
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